Wow Melody!!! You did a fantastic job on making sure that your reading was well informed about the background history of your subject. It kept me intrigued and opened my eyes to things that I may have never known otherwise. Good job. Here are some questions/suggestions that you might want to consider: 

  • Consider maybe trying to change some of your first person phrases to third person to enhance your paper even more. 
  • I would suggest maybe condensing some of the information you have so it is more direct while still keeping the great amount of depth in your paper that you have. 
  • What do you feel should have been left in its original context in the Bible and why?
  • How have different translations of the Bible support other cohorts of Christianity other than Catholics? i.e. Protestants and Baptists
  • Is anything really being lost through translation or it is a mere natural tendency for people to misunderstand things as they do with phrases within their own language?   
5/30/2012 12:01:30 am

is before long

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7/11/2012 04:36:29 pm

nice post

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